Comments on: The Old Switcharoo! http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/ Your comments, your thoughts, your class, your future. Wed, 05 Dec 2007 13:21:48 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Shivani U. http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1025 Shivani U. Wed, 05 Dec 2007 13:21:48 +0000 http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1025 Ms. Nero, my computer wouldn't let me paste all comments separatly. Performers and comments: Dakota- was clear, Will- needs to stop pusing and look up to the audience, Ashley- needs to face the audience, was loud, slow down, Nicole-was loud and clear, needs to communicate with audience, Jem- is really loud, look at audience, Brit- was good and loud, Eric- had good facial expresdions, and voice, Mikey- needs to know what to say, and not pause, Layton- stop messing with his sweater, be loud, have more emphasis in his voice, Jason-has good emphaisis in voice, look at audience, Matt- is good , loud is in the character, Harrison- be loud, slow down, get hands out of pocket, Karl- be loud, look at audience, stop shaking legs, needs to get into characater, Liesa- had good body movements, is loud, use space well,Lauren- has good voice, get comfartable with audience, Sarah- needs to be loud, Mandy has clear voice, Alexandra- was loud, Morgan- is into the character, Andrew- look at audience , be more loud, Sea n- be loud, clear Karlee- was loud, but needs to get into charcater, Meghnan, was really loud, and had was into the character. Ms. Nero, my computer wouldn’t let me paste all comments separatly.
Performers and comments:
Dakota- was clear, Will- needs to stop pusing and look up to the audience,

Ashley- needs to face the audience, was loud, slow down, Nicole-was loud and clear, needs to communicate with audience,

Jem- is really loud, look at audience,

Brit- was good and loud, Eric- had good facial expresdions, and voice,

Mikey- needs to know what to say, and not pause, Layton- stop messing with his sweater, be loud, have more emphasis in his voice,

Jason-has good emphaisis in voice, look at audience, Matt- is good , loud is in the character,

Harrison- be loud, slow down, get hands out of pocket, Karl- be loud, look at audience, stop shaking legs, needs to get into characater,

Liesa- had good body movements, is loud, use space well,Lauren- has good voice, get comfartable with audience,

Sarah- needs to be loud, Mandy has clear voice,

Alexandra- was loud, Morgan- is into the character,

Andrew- look at audience , be more loud, Sea n- be loud, clear

Karlee- was loud, but needs to get into charcater, Meghnan, was really loud, and had was into the character.

]]> By: Andrew L http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1024 Andrew L Mon, 03 Dec 2007 16:34:41 +0000 http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1024 Performeer: Dakota Commenter: Andrew L. You really showed your mood well. Try moving around some more. Performer: Will Commenter: Andrew L. When you are moving around while you are reading, don't move the same directions over and over. I could tell that you were really serious. Your voice helped me figure out what mood you were in. You did a good job being the character. Performer: Ashlee C. Commenter: Andrew L. Raise your voice more often at the correct times. You are supposed to be yelling. Slow down your reading too. Performer: Nicole Commenter: Andrew L. The characterization was great. Try to act more nervous, though. Performer: Jem Commenter: Andrew L. Your actions showed your mood very well. Emphasize more words. It would help you perform better. Performers: Brit, Eric Commenter: Andrew L. Brit: Read slower, and buy some time. Eric: Again, read slower to buy time. Performers: Shivani, Kaylee Comments: Andrew L. Shivani: Emphasize more words. Show your mood more. Kaylee: Move around some more. Performers: Mike, Leyton Comments: Andrew L. Mike: Show your mood more. Show some characterization. Leyton: Speek louder, and scarier. Pause between words. Performers: Jason, Matt Comments: Andrew L. Jason: Use more of an accent. Matt: You spoke nice and loud. Slow it down a little bit. Performers: Harrison, Carl Comments: Andrew L. Harrison: Raise your voice more. Slow it down a bit. Carl: Act physco. Raise your voice. Slow it down. Performers: Liesa, Nicole Comments: Andrew L. Liesa: You showed characterization well. Try to move around, and look at the audience. Nicole: Raise your voice. Try to Be the character. Performers: Sarah R., Mandy F. Comments: Andrew L. Sarah R.: Raise your voice, and emphasize words. Slow it down as well. Mandy F.: Show your emotions more. Performers: Morgan, Alexandra Comments: Andrew L. Alexandra: Show your emotions more, and speak louder. Morgan: Act phsyco, and strange, like you were crazy. Performeer: Dakota
Commenter: Andrew L.

You really showed your mood well. Try moving around some more.

Performer: Will
Commenter: Andrew L.

When you are moving around while you are reading, don’t move the same directions over and over. I could tell that you were really serious. Your voice helped me figure out what mood you were in. You did a good job being the character.

Performer: Ashlee C.
Commenter: Andrew L.

Raise your voice more often at the correct times. You are supposed to be yelling. Slow down your reading too.

Performer: Nicole
Commenter: Andrew L.

The characterization was great. Try to act more nervous, though.

Performer: Jem
Commenter: Andrew L.

Your actions showed your mood very well. Emphasize more words. It would help you perform better.

Performers: Brit, Eric
Commenter: Andrew L.

Brit: Read slower, and buy some time.
Eric: Again, read slower to buy time.

Performers: Shivani, Kaylee
Comments: Andrew L.

Shivani: Emphasize more words. Show your mood more.
Kaylee: Move around some more.

Performers: Mike, Leyton
Comments: Andrew L.

Mike: Show your mood more. Show some characterization.

Leyton: Speek louder, and scarier. Pause between words.

Performers: Jason, Matt

Comments: Andrew L.

Jason: Use more of an accent.

Matt: You spoke nice and loud. Slow it down a little bit.

Performers: Harrison, Carl
Comments: Andrew L.

Harrison: Raise your voice more. Slow it down a bit.

Carl: Act physco. Raise your voice. Slow it down.

Performers: Liesa, Nicole
Comments: Andrew L.

Liesa: You showed characterization well. Try to move around, and look at the audience.

Nicole: Raise your voice. Try to Be the character.

Performers: Sarah R., Mandy F.
Comments: Andrew L.

Sarah R.: Raise your voice, and emphasize words. Slow it down as well.

Mandy F.: Show your emotions more.

Performers: Morgan, Alexandra
Comments: Andrew L.

Alexandra: Show your emotions more, and speak louder.

Morgan: Act phsyco, and strange, like you were crazy.

]]> By: mikey c. http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1023 mikey c. Mon, 03 Dec 2007 16:34:07 +0000 http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1023 Performer:Alexandria Comments:Mikey C. You need to get into character and project your voice. Performer:Morgan M. Comments:Mikey C. You need to articulate your voice and get more into character. Performer:Andrew L. Comments:Mikey C. You need to get into character because if you do this monologue could be hilarious. Performer:Sean D. Comments:Mikey C. This monologue in the movie is hilarious if you get into character,project your voice.and emphasizeit would be awesome. Performer:Alexandria
Comments:Mikey C.
You need to get into character and project your voice.
Performer:Morgan M.
Comments:Mikey C.
You need to articulate your voice and get more into character.
Performer:Andrew L.
Comments:Mikey C.
You need to get into character because if you do this monologue could be hilarious.
Performer:Sean D.
Comments:Mikey C.
This monologue in the movie is hilarious if you get into character,project your voice.and emphasizeit would be awesome.

]]> By: Lauren S. http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1022 Lauren S. Mon, 03 Dec 2007 16:33:28 +0000 http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1022 Performer: Andrew Comments: From Lauren S. Good job. speak up a bit Performer: Sean Comments: From Lauren S. i would definitley speak up some. Performer: Andrew
Comments: From Lauren S.
Good job. speak up a bit

Performer: Sean
Comments: From Lauren S.
i would definitley speak up some.

]]> By: Liesa C http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1021 Liesa C Mon, 03 Dec 2007 16:32:46 +0000 http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1021 Performer: Sarah R. Comments: From Liesa C. Don’t hold your stomach unless its part of the role. And you didn’t show any emotion. Performer: Mandy F. Comments: From Liesa C. Good job, but don’t walk across the room. And if you are going to make it look like part of the character’s movement. Performer: Alex M. Comments: From Liesa C. Nice! I like the story. Slow it down and make it more funny. I know that Morgan will! Performer: Morgan M. Comments: From Liesa C. Movement! Use a lot more emotion. Performer: Andrew L. Comments: From Liesa C. I love that movie too much to not see anyone do it like Ferris. Good job on the word coverup. Make it more outgoing. Performer: Sean D. Comments: From Liesa C. That was quiet and not very fun to listen to. You need to be crazy like you usually are. It was not a fun voice to listen to. Performer: Sarah R.
Comments: From Liesa C.
Don’t hold your stomach unless its part of the role. And you didn’t show any emotion.

Performer: Mandy F.
Comments: From Liesa C.
Good job, but don’t walk across the room. And if you are going to make it look like part of the character’s movement.

Performer: Alex M.
Comments: From Liesa C.
Nice! I like the story. Slow it down and make it more funny. I know that Morgan will!

Performer: Morgan M.
Comments: From Liesa C.
Movement! Use a lot more emotion.

Performer: Andrew L.
Comments: From Liesa C.
I love that movie too much to not see anyone do it like Ferris. Good job on the word coverup. Make it more outgoing.

Performer: Sean D.
Comments: From Liesa C.
That was quiet and not very fun to listen to. You need to be crazy like you usually are. It was not a fun voice to listen to.

]]> By: Jem P. http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1020 Jem P. Mon, 03 Dec 2007 16:32:23 +0000 http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1020 ****YOU GUYS ARE ALL IN HERE!!!!!!!!!!! Lo0K 4 ur NAMES!!!!!!!!!!!!**** BY: JEM PICA Performer: karlee R. Comments: Jem P. Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character and its like you practice it couple of times Performer: Meghan J. Comments: Jem P. meghan, your voice - how you say every word and your pause is go0d Performer: Dak0ta M. Comments: Jem P. Dak0ta, nicE... the way you read it and your pause keep it up... Performer: Will H. Comments: Jem P. will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT Performer: Ashley C. Comments: Jem P. great! its like you practice a lot Performer: Nicole P. Comments: Jem P. The way you say it is g0od... keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands. Performer: Brit k. & eric S. Comments: Jem P. Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B. Comments: Jem P. Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well you trY!!! Kailee, wh0w... that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R. Comments: Jem P. Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try Performer: JAs0n p. & Matt T. Comments: Jem P. Performer: karlee R. Comments: Jem P. Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character and its like you practice it couple of times Performer: Meghan J. Comments: Jem P. meghan, your voice - how you say every word and your pause is go0d Performer: Dak0ta M. Comments: Jem P. Dak0ta, nicE... the way you read it and your pause keep it up... Performer: Will H. Comments: Jem P. will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT Performer: Ashley C. Comments: Jem P. great! its like you practice a lot Performer: Nicole P. Comments: Jem P. The way you say it is g0od... keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands. Performer: Brit k. & eric S. Comments: Jem P. Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B. Comments: Jem P. Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well you trY!!! Kailee, wh0w... that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R. Comments: Jem P. Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try Performer: karlee R. Comments: Jem P. Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character and its like you practice it couple of times Performer: Meghan J. Comments: Jem P. meghan, your voice - how you say every word and your pause is go0d Performer: Dak0ta M. Comments: Jem P. Dak0ta, nicE... the way you read it and your pause keep it up... Performer: Will H. Comments: Jem P. will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT Performer: Ashley C. Comments: Jem P. great! its like you practice a lot Performer: Nicole P. Comments: Jem P. The way you say it is g0od... keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands. Performer: Brit k. & eric S. Comments: Jem P. Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B. Comments: Jem P. Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well you trY!!! Kailee, wh0w... that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R. Comments: Jem P. Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try Performer: JAs0n p. & Matt T. Comments: Jem P. jas0n, its go0d but slow d0en a little bit Matt, go0d j0b the way you use your hands but slow d0wn a bit. Performer: karlee R. Comments: Jem P. Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character and its like you practice it couple of times Performer: Meghan J. Comments: Jem P. meghan, your voice - how you say every word and your pause is go0d Performer: Dak0ta M. Comments: Jem P. Dak0ta, nicE... the way you read it and your pause keep it up... Performer: Will H. Comments: Jem P. will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT Performer: Ashley C. Comments: Jem P. great! its like you practice a lot Performer: Nicole P. Comments: Jem P. The way you say it is g0od... keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands. Performer: Brit k. & eric S. Comments: Jem P. Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B. Comments: Jem P. Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well you trY!!! Kailee, wh0w... that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R. Comments: Jem P. Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try Performer: HArris0n W. & karl Comments: Jem P. harrisson, your em0tions work well! need to speak up a bit Karl, go0d j0b!!!! you try'' Performer: karlee R. Comments: Jem P. Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character and its like you practice it couple of times Performer: Meghan J. Comments: Jem P. meghan, your voice - how you say every word and your pause is go0d Performer: Dak0ta M. Comments: Jem P. Dak0ta, nicE... the way you read it and your pause keep it up... Performer: Will H. Comments: Jem P. will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT Performer: Ashley C. Comments: Jem P. great! its like you practice a lot Performer: Nicole P. Comments: Jem P. The way you say it is g0od... keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands. Performer: Brit k. & eric S. Comments: Jem P. Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B. Comments: Jem P. Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well you trY!!! Kailee, wh0w... that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R. Comments: Jem P. Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try Performer: Liesa C. & lauren Comments: Jem P. Liesa - ok g0od j0b you did really well lauren- speak up a bit and where is the movement of your hands??? Performer: karlee R. Comments: Jem P. Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character and its like you practice it couple of times Performer: Meghan J. Comments: Jem P. meghan, your voice - how you say every word and your pause is go0d Performer: Dak0ta M. Comments: Jem P. Dak0ta, nicE... the way you read it and your pause keep it up... Performer: Will H. Comments: Jem P. will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT Performer: Ashley C. Comments: Jem P. great! its like you practice a lot Performer: Nicole P. Comments: Jem P. The way you say it is g0od... keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands. Performer: Brit k. & eric S. Comments: Jem P. Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B. Comments: Jem P. Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well you trY!!! Kailee, wh0w... that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R. Comments: Jem P. Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try Performer: SArah R. & MAndy F. Comments: Jem P. SArah, More feelings Get int0 the character MAndy, thats go0d but where is the movements of your hands Performer: karlee R. Comments: Jem P. Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character and its like you practice it couple of times Performer: Meghan J. Comments: Jem P. meghan, your voice - how you say every word and your pause is go0d Performer: Dak0ta M. Comments: Jem P. Dak0ta, nicE... the way you read it and your pause keep it up... Performer: Will H. Comments: Jem P. will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT Performer: Ashley C. Comments: Jem P. great! its like you practice a lot Performer: Nicole P. Comments: Jem P. The way you say it is g0od... keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands. Performer: Brit k. & eric S. Comments: Jem P. Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B. Comments: Jem P. Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well you trY!!! Kailee, wh0w... that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R. Comments: Jem P. Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try Performer: Alexandra M & Morgan M. Comments: Jem P. ****YOU GUYS ARE ALL IN HERE!!!!!!!!!!! Lo0K 4 ur NAMES!!!!!!!!!!!!****
BY: JEM PICA

Performer: karlee R.
Comments: Jem P.

Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character
and its like you practice it couple of times

Performer: Meghan J.
Comments: Jem P.

meghan, your voice – how you say every word and your pause is go0d

Performer: Dak0ta M.
Comments: Jem P.

Dak0ta, nicE… the way you read it and your pause keep it up…

Performer: Will H.
Comments: Jem P.

will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT

Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: Jem P.

great! its like you practice a lot

Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: Jem P.

The way you say it is g0od… keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands.

Performer: Brit k. & eric S.
Comments: Jem P.

Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah
Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character

Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B.
Comments: Jem P.

Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well
you trY!!!

Kailee, wh0w… that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d

Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R.
Comments: Jem P.

Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more

LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try

Performer: JAs0n p. & Matt T.
Comments: Jem P.

Performer: karlee R.
Comments: Jem P.

Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character
and its like you practice it couple of times

Performer: Meghan J.
Comments: Jem P.

meghan, your voice – how you say every word and your pause is go0d

Performer: Dak0ta M.
Comments: Jem P.

Dak0ta, nicE… the way you read it and your pause keep it up…

Performer: Will H.
Comments: Jem P.

will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT

Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: Jem P.

great! its like you practice a lot

Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: Jem P.

The way you say it is g0od… keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands.

Performer: Brit k. & eric S.
Comments: Jem P.

Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah
Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character

Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B.
Comments: Jem P.

Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well
you trY!!!

Kailee, wh0w… that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d

Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R.
Comments: Jem P.

Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more

LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try

Performer: karlee R.
Comments: Jem P.

Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character
and its like you practice it couple of times

Performer: Meghan J.
Comments: Jem P.

meghan, your voice – how you say every word and your pause is go0d

Performer: Dak0ta M.
Comments: Jem P.

Dak0ta, nicE… the way you read it and your pause keep it up…

Performer: Will H.
Comments: Jem P.

will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT

Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: Jem P.

great! its like you practice a lot

Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: Jem P.

The way you say it is g0od… keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands.

Performer: Brit k. & eric S.
Comments: Jem P.

Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah
Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character

Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B.
Comments: Jem P.

Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well
you trY!!!

Kailee, wh0w… that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d

Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R.
Comments: Jem P.

Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more

LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try

Performer: JAs0n p. & Matt T.
Comments: Jem P.

jas0n, its go0d but slow d0en a little bit
Matt, go0d j0b the way you use your hands but slow d0wn a bit.

Performer: karlee R.
Comments: Jem P.

Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character
and its like you practice it couple of times

Performer: Meghan J.
Comments: Jem P.

meghan, your voice – how you say every word and your pause is go0d

Performer: Dak0ta M.
Comments: Jem P.

Dak0ta, nicE… the way you read it and your pause keep it up…

Performer: Will H.
Comments: Jem P.

will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT

Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: Jem P.

great! its like you practice a lot

Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: Jem P.

The way you say it is g0od… keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands.

Performer: Brit k. & eric S.
Comments: Jem P.

Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah
Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character

Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B.
Comments: Jem P.

Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well
you trY!!!

Kailee, wh0w… that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d

Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R.
Comments: Jem P.

Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more

LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try

Performer: HArris0n W. & karl
Comments: Jem P.
harrisson, your em0tions work well! need to speak up a bit
Karl, go0d j0b!!!! you try”

Performer: karlee R.
Comments: Jem P.

Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character
and its like you practice it couple of times

Performer: Meghan J.
Comments: Jem P.

meghan, your voice – how you say every word and your pause is go0d

Performer: Dak0ta M.
Comments: Jem P.

Dak0ta, nicE… the way you read it and your pause keep it up…

Performer: Will H.
Comments: Jem P.

will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT

Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: Jem P.

great! its like you practice a lot

Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: Jem P.

The way you say it is g0od… keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands.

Performer: Brit k. & eric S.
Comments: Jem P.

Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah
Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character

Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B.
Comments: Jem P.

Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well
you trY!!!

Kailee, wh0w… that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d

Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R.
Comments: Jem P.

Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more

LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try

Performer: Liesa C. & lauren
Comments: Jem P.

Liesa – ok g0od j0b you did really well
lauren- speak up a bit and where is the movement of your hands???

Performer: karlee R.
Comments: Jem P.

Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character
and its like you practice it couple of times

Performer: Meghan J.
Comments: Jem P.

meghan, your voice – how you say every word and your pause is go0d

Performer: Dak0ta M.
Comments: Jem P.

Dak0ta, nicE… the way you read it and your pause keep it up…

Performer: Will H.
Comments: Jem P.

will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT

Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: Jem P.

great! its like you practice a lot

Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: Jem P.

The way you say it is g0od… keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands.

Performer: Brit k. & eric S.
Comments: Jem P.

Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah
Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character

Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B.
Comments: Jem P.

Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well
you trY!!!

Kailee, wh0w… that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d

Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R.
Comments: Jem P.

Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more

LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try

Performer: SArah R. & MAndy F.
Comments: Jem P.

SArah, More feelings Get int0 the character
MAndy, thats go0d but where is the movements of your hands

Performer: karlee R.
Comments: Jem P.

Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character
and its like you practice it couple of times

Performer: Meghan J.
Comments: Jem P.

meghan, your voice – how you say every word and your pause is go0d

Performer: Dak0ta M.
Comments: Jem P.

Dak0ta, nicE… the way you read it and your pause keep it up…

Performer: Will H.
Comments: Jem P.

will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT

Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: Jem P.

great! its like you practice a lot

Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: Jem P.

The way you say it is g0od… keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands.

Performer: Brit k. & eric S.
Comments: Jem P.

Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah
Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character

Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B.
Comments: Jem P.

Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well
you trY!!!

Kailee, wh0w… that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d

Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R.
Comments: Jem P.

Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more

LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try

Performer: Alexandra M & Morgan M.
Comments: Jem P.

]]> By: will h. http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1019 will h. Mon, 03 Dec 2007 16:31:52 +0000 http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1019 Performer: andrew Comments:will h. great, and goot timeing sean d. will h. i didnt like it at all u need to accually try but u had good timeing :) Performer: andrew
Comments:will h.
great, and goot timeing

sean d.
will h.
i didnt like it at all u need to accually try
but u had good timeing :)

]]> By: Morgan M. http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1018 Morgan M. Mon, 03 Dec 2007 16:31:28 +0000 http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1018 Performer: Andrew L. Comments: From Morgan M. Get more into character, and much more movements. Performer: Sean D. Comments: From Morgan M. Work on projection and movements, not just reading it off the paper. i couldn't really understand what you were saying. Performer: Andrew L.
Comments: From Morgan M.
Get more into character, and much more movements.

Performer: Sean D.
Comments: From Morgan M.
Work on projection and movements, not just reading it off the paper. i couldn’t really understand what you were saying.

]]> By: shortpump http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1017 shortpump Mon, 03 Dec 2007 16:31:08 +0000 http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1017 Andrew - believe in the character!!! This character is serious and speaks cunningly and slowly. Sean - An accent would work well for this monologue. Remember to have fun when you're becoming the character!!! Andrew –
believe in the character!!! This character is serious and speaks cunningly and slowly.

Sean –
An accent would work well for this monologue. Remember to have fun when you’re becoming the character!!!

]]> By: BritK http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1016 BritK Mon, 03 Dec 2007 16:31:06 +0000 http://shortpumpdrama.wordpress.com/2007/12/03/the-old-switcharoo/#comment-1016 Alexandra your time was perfect you did a good job. Morgandid a good job. Andrew did a good job he covered the bad word well. sean could talk with more inthusiasticism and be more into it. Alexandra your time was perfect you did a good job. Morgandid a good job. Andrew did a good job he covered the bad word well. sean could talk with more inthusiasticism and be more into it.

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