Today’s drama experiment involves taking your character to another level by switching places with another performer! We will switch monologues with each other and then act out the monologue and be graded on the performance. You will return to the blog after each performance in order to leave comments. All comments should be specific and give the monologue owner something to think about that helps them improve their performance 
If you were the one acting out the monologue, you do not need to comment unless you would like to add something you noticed.
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Performer: Ricky Bobby W.
Comments: From Johnny A.
This piece needs a lot of volume because he sounds like he’s angry that he caught on fire and lost the ability to walk. Make sure you stay serious even if we all know it’s a comedy – that seriousness if what actually makes it so funny
Karlee you did a great job and you had great emotion
Performer: Karlee R.
Comments: Dakota M.
It was performed really good because it had and angry tone in her story bringing the story to life
Performer: Karlee Roberts.
Comments: From Matt Tissiere
That was really good. You had really good emotion.
Performer: Karlee R.
From: The performance was very expressive. i think you did a good job. I understand you dont have the lines memorized but it may have needed a little more movement
Performer: Karlee R.
Comments: From Liesa C.
That was good for your first time performing. I enjoyed it but it went by too fast. You need to slooowww it down some. But other than that it was AWESOME!
Karlee yours was really good. You had really good emotion. I like the way you got into character.
Performer: karlie r.
Comments: will h.
great job! i really liked the emfisison feelling sorry for that guy
you did a really goood job!
i like your tone and t seemed you really knew it being that it wasn’t yours.
Performer: Meghan J.
Comments: Dakota M.
Since ive seen this movie before its very good. there was a lot of clarity, and that kind of prissy tone
Megan you did good getting into character, but you should use a little more emotion.
Performer: Meghan Joyce
From: Nicole P
I think you needed a little more expressiveness in your words. Ohter than that it was well perfromed
Performer: Meghan Joyce.
Comments: From Matt Tissiere.
You got into character really well. Your emotion wwas also really good.
When you talk try to show feeling .You did a great job just try on the accents and then you probbably will nail it.
I like the way your eyes looked up. good job.Karllle
Performer: Dakota M.
Comments: From Morgan M.
You really took the time to get into character, and mabey to a little more movement.
Performer: Dakota M.
Comments:Jason P
Maybe a little more personality could be put in it. It also needed more volume.
Dakota morh did really good cause he used a prop and tlak clrealy and loud.
Dakota you did really good with the emotions, it sounded like you had been practicing for a while. You got into character good too.
Will you did great getting into character you spoke at a perfect level. I really liked your emotion.
Will hickman did a good job because he used a prop and walked back and forth.
Performer: Dakota Mohr
From: Nicole P
well expressed, very well done. Volume was very well heard.
Performer: Will Hickman
i liked the way you made your voice and the way you said your wrods. It was at a good pace. And i think you could have used better use of your space. Try not to pace around in circles so much.
Dakota, you need to get into the monologue, and use more emotion
Will, You did a great job, you spoke up, and got into character
Performer: Karlie R
Comments: Sarah R.
Very good. Maybe just a bit more emphasis on your words.
DAKOTA!
i lovee loveee your voice!
you sound really into it
Performer:Karlee R.
Comments: From Layton rose
Good voice changes and emotions, but you need to slow it down a little.
Performer:meghan j
Comments: From Layton R great voice tones and inflection
Performer:Dakota M
Comments: From Layton R Nice use of props and movement around on stage and slow down a little.
Performer:Will H
Comments: From Layton R Good movement nice use of acents and the cane also nice speed.
Karlee –
Your hand gestures were effective
Meghan –
Your inflection worked well. You had that stuck up, smarty kind of attitude.
Dakota –
The character is a little more over the top than the performance you gave. This is for Will – be serious when it comes to
Will –
Try an accent!
Performer: Meghan J
Comments: Sarah R.
Your emotion was really well portrayed. Very good.
Performer: Ashley Coleman.
Comments: From Matt Tissiere.
You had a lot of emotion. I think you could have used more hand gesture.
performer: wil h
comments:erica h.
try not to walk back and forth good vocals You got into character fast. your emotion was good keep practicing.
Performer: ashley c.
Comments: willh
good i like that you seemed accualy sad
Performer: Nicole Perkins.
Comments: From Matt Tissiere.
You really got into the character and had good emotion.
Ashley Coleman did good because she talked really clear she just needed to get a little more into charcter.
Performer:Dakota M.
Comment: From Sarah R
I like your nice use of props. Overall good performance.
Performer:Will H.
Comment: From Sarah R
Good expression and character
performer:Karlee R.
Comments:from Mikey C.
You can project your voice very well but, you can pause and emphasize a little more.
performer:Megan J.
Comments Mikey C.
I think you need to pronounce your words a little better and talk a little louder.
Performer:Dakota M.
Comments: Mikey C.
I think you need to talk a little slower. Also you need to act almost psycho.
Performer:Will H.
Comments: Mikey C.
Overall pretty good but I think you need to emphasize a little more.
Performer:Ashlee C.
Comments: Mikey C.
I think you need to talk a lot slower.You also need to become the character a little more.
Performer:Nicole P.
Comments: Mikey C.
I think you are being to much like yourself ,but your proununciation throughout was great.
Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: From Lauren S.
You should have slowed down a little bit.
Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: From Lauren S.
Did a great job! You should have slowed down after you said you were going too fast.
Performer: Ashlee C
you need to slow down!!!. and use more expression in your words. Your pointing was good though.
Performer: Jem P
Greatt Inflection! Volume was very well heard. slow down just a little bit. well done!
Performer: Jem Pica.
Comments: From Matt Tissiere.
That was good. You were really characterized.
Ashley –
Great inflection and pronunciation. This monologue can be slowed down quite a bit.
Nicole P –
hand gestures are a good way to tell the audience that you’re nervous, confident, etc. Mia should be matching her words with her body movements.
Jem –
Good hand movements – hand to chest when talking about yourself, out to your sides in frustration.
Performer:
Comments: From Morgan M.
I like the accent very nice touch. But I couldn’t tell what attitide you were trying to do.
Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: From Morgan M.
Try to impact and put in a lot of pauses.
Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: From Morgan M.
There should be many more pauses then there were to impact the situation.
Performer: Jem P.
Comments: From Morgan M.
You did a good job getting into character, but add in more pauses to impact.
Performer: ashley c.
Good job. I just think you need to portray your character a bit more.
Performer: Nicole Perkins
Good emotion and emphasis on certain words.
Jem you should try to get into character and slow down some. You got into character good too.
Nicole was really good she got into the charcter and made good faces.
Performer: Brit K./Eric S.
Comments: Dakota M.
perfect chracterization, they fit the characters really good.
Performer: Jem P.
Comments: From Sarah Ross
I thought it was a good performance, you just need to tone it down a bit. Good job overall.
Brit did good he just needed to get into the charcter more.
Eric did really good he got into the charcter really good.
Performer: nicole p.
Comments: will h.
i reconized the movieright away and ithought you did awsome.
Performer: jem p.
Comments: willh.
you seemed verry relieved just like in the movie
Performer: britt k.
Comments: will h.
great! i love that movie and you brought it to life
eric- woah great and i loved it and that movie
performer:jem
comments:
good voice you got into character fast
performers: britt and eric
comments: You got into charecter fast and good try not to walk back and forth very fast.
Performer: Brit Kern
pronounce words better. more energy. good expression.
Performer: Eric Shaver
Great energy! i liked how you said shes the man. also how you would raise you voice and how you really get into character.
performer:NIcole p
Layton r: Good speed and voice sound but a little fast but it was good
Jem- Good speed and acent nice job-by layton
Britt- Good speed and inflection -layton r
Eric-Good speed and volume and pauses and use of props.-by layton
Brit –
This monologue needs a lot, I mean a lot of attitude and emphasis. Match the hands and move around and walk to the beat and rhythm of your words.
Eric –
Nice! You really bring the attitude to life and emphasize in the right areas. I would like to see more hand movements.
Performer:Will
Comments:From Sean D.
i liked the akcent you did and the pitch of your voice.
Performer:ashley
Comments: From SEan D.
dont talk so fast because i couldn’t understand you.
Performer:Brit
Comments:From Sean D.
you should yell and be more confident./Eric-you were great i loved how u yelled and threw your water bottle.
Megan did a good job she pronounced it well. Dakotta did a great job and i like the props. Will did a good on te accent and i liked the kane. Ashley you did a great job and you talked loud which was good. Nicole you did good. Eric did a great job! U yelled a lot which was great
Character: Brit
Comments: Sarah R.
I though it was really good. You just need more emphasis in certain parts of the monologue
Character: Eric
Comments: Sarah R.
Very nice. You got into character pretty well.
Brit you did good but you should speak up a little bit. You got into character great.
Eric you should slow down too. You had the emotion but it was really fast.
Performer: Brit K.
Comments: From Lauren S.
Try to use more attitudes and hang gestures.
Performer: Eric S.
Comments: From Lauren S.
Did a great job. You should have slowed down a little more. I like how you threw down the water bottle. Great use of props.
Peformer: Shavani s.
louder! more expression. other than that… well done! more movement.
Performer: Kailee B.
well said, i liked the way you said your words. a little louder.
Shivani –
Where were the movements? More emphasis and this monologue can be slowed down for emphasis.
kailee –
Bring the emotion into this monologue. Invite us into your strange and interesting world with the tone of your voice and the rhythm and rate of the words.
Performer: Shivani Uphadya.
Comments: From Matt Tissiere.
Nice emotion. You could have more gestures
Performer: Kailee Berresford
Comments: From Matt Tissiere
You had good emotion. I think youo could speed up a little
Brit- you need to get into this
Eric-hilarious but slow down
Shivaaani-needs work
Kailee- this is drama class
Shivani you should try to be the character. You should try to use movements too.
Kailee- You did great but you should try to get into character. You should use emotions and movements too.
Kailee- good job though less pauses
Performer: Shavanni S.
Comments: Sarah Ro.
I think you needed a bit more emotion and expression. Good job overall.
Performer: Kailee B.
Just a bit louder! Other than that good.
Performer: shivanti
Comments:will h.
NO movements. no action. but i did like it sooo make it last longer
Performer: kalie
Comments: will h.
strange and i didnt understnd it but i sounded good
Performer:Jem P.
Comments:Mikey C.
I think you need to slow down and empasize when its right and not all of the time.
performer: shrivani
comments:Really work on ur movement and voice
perfromer: Will H
comments from: Alexandra M
you used the cane well, and your tone of the voice of the character your were doing was really good.
performer: Ashley C
comments from: Alexandra M
good job using your voice tone, but slow down a little so that its about a minute.
performer: Nicole P
really good job with the tone of your voice!
performer: Jem P
good job using your hands and getting louder when you needed to, get louder or get quieter
performer: eric s
really good job, using your voice tone, and getting louder when you needed to, and put emphasis on certain words
performer: brit k
good job, but slow it down a little so that it will last longer
performer: shivani u
get a little bit louder and use more emphasis on words, get more into the character.
performer: kailee b
use your hands more
Performer: Shivani
Comments: From Lauren S.
Use more hand gestures.
Performer: Kailee
Comments: From Lauren S.
God job. Should show more of your attitude.
Performer: Mikey Cantor.
Comments: From Matt Tissiere.
You could get in character more. Nice emotion.
Performer: Mikey C
Comments: Jason P
Good job, but in some parts it needs inflection.
Performer:Layton R
More volume and personality. Otherwise i thought it was good
Performer: Britt K.
Comments: From Morgan M.
I couldn’t tell what your attitude was and you didn’t get into character as much as you can.
Performer: Eric S.
Comments: From Morgan M.
There should be many more pauses to impact the situation.
Performer: Shivani U.
Comments: From Morgan M.
There was not any movements or any characterization.
Performer: Kailee
Comments: From Morgan M.
There should be more characterization. There were plenty of pauses.
Performer: Mikey C.
Comments: From Morgan M.
Good characterization but more movements.
Performer: Layton R.
Comments: From Morgan M.
Not many movements, better projetion.
mikey- speak up and use emtion when you speak
Layton- great! speak up
Mikey –
I suggest explicit hand movements – when you cut, use a cutting movements. Pace, and use the rhythm of your voice to tell you when and how to move.
Layton –
Your emphasis will get you far in this one Mikey. I’d also suggest pacing and fistlike gestures.
Performer: Mikey C./ Layton R.
Comments: Dakota M.
very good voice clarity good characterization, good characters for their story.
Performer: Mikey C.
voice volume was good. i think you did a very well done performance except for the pages gtting messed up.
Perfromer: Layton R.
nice facial expressions? a smidge louder. well spoken
Mikey- you should speak up and use emotion
Layton- talk louder
Performer: Mikey C.
Comments: From Lauren S.
Did a good job at beginning. I would speed it up a little bit though. Show more of your attitude
Performer: Layton R.
Comments: From Lauren S.
Speak up a little up. Hold a longer pause before you say yet. Use more emphasis.
Kalee did a good job but she needs to inflecutiate more. Mikey dd a good job but needs to talk louder. Laton was great but he needs to talk louder . Jason did great job but needs to slow down some.
mikey did really good he got into the character
layton did good he just needed to get a little more into the character.
Jason- slow down, good job
Matt- more emphasis, good job
Performer: Jason P.
slow down a little. good expression.
Performer: Matt T.
i like the way you said your words. Also your movement were very good. Sloww down a bit.
Jason –
Slow this monologue down and make it curious and interesting by always leaving something lingering in each sentence before you finish it.
Matt –
Use your hand gestures even in the beginning. Slow it down!
Performer: Jason P/Matt T.
Comments: Dakota M.
funny good characterization for both of the stories
Performer: Jason P.
Comments: From Morgan M.
More movement to excuentuate your character. Couldn’t hear you.
Performer: Matt T.
Comments: From Morgan M.
Much more movements, and many more pauses.
Performer: Jason P.
Comments: From Lauren S.
I would slow down some.
Performer: Matt. T.
Comments: From Lauren S.
I would slow down some too. Good hand movements and emphasis.
Performer: jasson and matt
comments: good voice and emotions try slowing down when you talk
Performer: mikey c.
Comments:will h.
ummm it was good and threatning. speed it upa little and then get it in order
but otherwise it was awsome!
Performer: layton
Comments:will h.
i love that movie. and u were doing a great job beeing evil
but u should add emphisis on the ending
Performer: jayson p.
Comments:will h.
please slo down a little and haha that was funny
matt t. goood just SLOW down a little.
Performer:layton
Comments:From Sean D.
you need to sound more evil and kind of whisper.
Performer:Matt
Comments:From Sean D.
you need to slow down.
Performer: harryson w.
Comments:will h.
louder but otherwise good
Matt did really good he got into the character he just needs to slow it down.
Jason good job you just need to talk a little louder.
Harrison needs talk louder.
jason- speak up
matt- more emphasis good job getting into character slow down
Performer: Harry W
Comments; Jason P
Not very much emotion, it sounded very flat.
Performer: Karl
More emotion could be used, and maybe some more volume
Harrison –
You emphasized the word “naughty” well, and I’d like to see that throughout the monologue.
karl –
Slow it down. This monologue is meant to be serious, totally serious. The character is acting dreamy and spacey, yet patriotic.
Performer: Harrison W./Karl S.
Comments: Dakota M.
low voice tone and kind of monotone,Needs a better tone for the story
Performer: Harrison W.
louder! nice expressio but you need to get more into character. also more movement.
Performrer: Karl S.
nice voice inflection. louder. more emphasis on words.
Performer: Harrison W.
Comments: From Lauren S.
Speak up a lot more.
Performer: Karl S.
Comments: From Lauren S.
Speak up some. Pause more if you can.
Performer: Harrison W.
Comments: From Morgan M.
Work on projection, and more movements.
Performer: Carl S.
Comments: From Morgan M.
Many more pauses and get into character.
Comments by Sarah R.
Harrison: Good emphasis and emotion.
Karl: Good job. Just try to get a bit more into character.
performer:harison and karl
coments: good vocie try to speek up good emotions
Performer: Meghan J.
Comments: From Liesa C.
You need to pronounceit your words more clearly. In the movie she speaks kind of with a lot of attitude. You need to make it sound more like she hates him.
Performer: Dakota M.
Comments: From Liesa C.
You kind of got tangled up in the end. Nice! It was good but you need to slow down. And make it more hateful and with more attitude.
Performer: William H.
Comments: Liesa C.
I liked the prop. It showed off your character. But you need to have more of a cool accent that would add a little flavor.
Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: From Liesa C.
Slow down girl. And you need attitude. I love that monlogue though and it needs to sound like her with some impact.
Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: From Liesa C.
It needs to slow down and with some more emotion. It was goood though.
Performer: Jem P.
Comments: From Liesa C.
I know that you have an accent and all… but can you speak a little more without the accent? And it was fast, but it was good for your first time.
Performer: Brit K.
Comments: From Liesa C.
You rocked it! But don’t talk to fast and add pauses.
Performer: Eric S.
Comments: From Liesa C.
I loved it, good inflection in your voice. You sounded just like Jack Black. But make it slower to buy you some time.
Performer: Shivani U.
Comments: From Liesa C.
You bobble your head when you speak. Try not to. And do some movement with your body. But other than that it was cool.
Performer: Kailee B.
Comments: From Liesa C.
I liked your little noises during the performance. You did an awesome job with your voice. I liked the movements. Shivani could learn a lot from you.
Performer: Mikey C.
Comments: From Liesa C.
You had good pauses. And you acted very scary like the character. It was boring and you need to make sure people have your attention. It seemed like it lasted forever.
Performer: Layton R.
Comments: From Liesa C.
You were too quiet. You need to sound evil and creepy. With that creepy little voice that he has in the movie.
Performer: Jason P.
Comments: From Liesa C.
You couldn’t tell what you were saying. You need to pronouce your words more carefully.
Performer: Matt T.
Comments: From Liesa C.
Get your hand out of you pocket. But I couldn’t totally hear you. Good job on your movements. You were really good at the role.
Performer: Harrison W.
Comments: From Liesa C.
LOUDER! And slow down. But then you need to not have your voice go up high. Show some more emotion as well.
Performer: Carl S.
Comments: From Liesa C.
You had no up and downs in your voice. And it was boring. Add some more seriously.
Performer: Liesa C./ Lauren S.
Comments: Dakota M.
perfect characterization for the monologue, great hand gestures, and just good overall.
Liesa- good emphasis, good job staying in character
Lauren- Speak up,
Performer: Liesa C.
Comments: From Morgan M.
Loved it and work on more movements.
Performer: Lauren S.
Comments: From Morgan M.
Work on being a little louder, more movenments to get more into character.
Liesa –
Hand movements work well, but remember to show emotion in your body movements as well.
Lauren –
This character is strong, so your voice should be loud and bold and strong! Hand should be thrown around in frustration.
Perfromer: Shivani- use movements and be confident and slow down a little and look up.-Layton
Performer:kalilee speed up a little and add more emotion.
Jason- Good acent ,but slow down a litte-layton
MAtt t.-good pauses and movements
Harrison-be a little louder and more expression -layton
Karl- Add lots more emotion and enphisis.-layton
Liesa- good expression and emotion.-layton
Lauren- Speek up a little and add emotion add some movments also.
Performer: Leisa C.
nice emphasis. you really got into character. it was veryy good!
Performer:Lauren S.
a bit louder. nice job! it was at a good speed
Liesa- you got into character good
Lauren- speak up and try to use a little more emotion
Performer: Karlee
Comments: From Kailee B.
I like how you used your hands to gesture. The inflection of your voice went really well with the mood of the monologue. Meghan should do that same stuff. :]
Performer: Meghan
Comments: From Kailee B.
You read a little fast, but the high pitch of your voice seemed to fit in with what you were saying. On the end though, you maybe should say it with more emphasis. :]
Performer: Dakota
Comments: From Kailee B.
There were a lot of pauses and stuff, so slow down and read more carefully. :]
Performer: Will H.
Comments: From Kailee B.
The pacing did make it seem more realistic. Getting kind of angry in the middle was also really convincing. Nice job :]
Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: From Kailee B.
Talk a little louder, move a little more, and talk slower. You voice goes well though, and just like with Meghan, make the end seem more important. :]
Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: From Kailee B.
I couldn’t really understand the mood of your character. You went a little fast but otherwise it was pretty good. :]
Performer: Jem P.
Comments: From Kailee B.
I thought that you might need a few more pauses, and articulate a little more. Your accent is still fun and it kinda works with this. :]
Performer: Brit K.
Comments: From Kailee B.
I like the idea of the monologue, but read slower. Make it stretch out and point out the each ideas more. :]
Performer: Eric S.
Comments: From Kailee B.
Shouting and using props made it sooooo good. Slow down and just make each part a little more important. :]
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Performer: Mikey C.
Comments: From Kailee B.
The tone of your voice could have been a little deeper, or softer. Don’t make it too soft, just enough to get the point across. :]
Performer: Layton R.
Comments: From Kailee B.
You sounded a little flat in your voice. Change it up a little to keep it interesting. :]
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Performer: Jason P.
Comments: From Kailee B.
Slow down. And um…the end? Confused me, but the way you said it so casually made it funny. Good job. :]
Performer: Matt T.
Comments: From Kailee B.
Being loud worked for you. But just don’t over do it. Like everyone else, slow down and use emphasis. :]
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Performer: Harrison W.
Comments: From Kailee B.
Louder… louder. Using the little accent on the pet part, was good. Slow down too. Other than that, it was good. :]
Performer: Karl S.
Comments: From Kailee B.
The monologue was a little odd, but you made it work out right. Stay serious and get into it. :]
Matt did a great job but needs to slow down. Harrison did a good job but he needs to move more. Karl needs to infleucate more and move around.
liesa you did a great job at everything you spoke right. Lauren did a good job.
Performer:Brit K.
Comments:Mikey C.
I think you need to get more in character and talk slower.
Performer:Eric S.
Comments:Mikey C.
I think you did very well emphasizing and projecting.
Performer:Shivani
Comments:Mikey C.
I think you need to emphasize and project your voice.Also you need to get into character.Another thing is you need to use the hand gestures
movements ect.
Performer:Kailee B.
Comments:Mikey C.
You need emphasize and pause where needed. You also need to use your attitude the right way.
Performer:Jason P.
Comments:Mikey C.
I think you did a good job but empasis can make your performance great
Performer:matt T.
Comments:Mikey C.
I think you just need to slow down a little.
Performer:Harrison
Comments:Mikey C.
I think you need to project your voice. Also you need to get in character this performance could be great.
Performer: Karl S.
Comments:Mikey C.
I think you need to emphasize and get into character.
Performer:Liesa
Comments:Mikey C.
You did a great job on projecting your voice and getting into to character.
Performer: Lauren S.
Comments:Mikey C.
I think you need to talk louder and change your voice to get into to character
Sarah- talk louder
Mandy- you did good but try to get into character a little more
Performer: Sarah R./ Mandy F.
Comments: Dakota M.
good voice tone, and good inflection.
Performer:Sarah R.
the way said it was very good. i think you did a very good performance.
Performer: Mandy F.
a little bit louder. and get more into character.
Performer: Sara
Comments: From Morgan M.
More movements and more pauses.
Performer: Mandy F.
Comments: From Morgan M.
More movements to exentuate you character. But good projection.
Mandy-overall good job
Alexandria- good job
Performer: Sarah
Comments: From Lauren S.
I like how you said big dumb combat boots. Good job with the pausing and emphasis.
Performer: Mandy F.
Comments: From Lauren S.
Did a great job. I like how you spoke softly but loud enough for everyone to hear.
Alexandra- talk a little louder
Sarah –
Pace and use hand gestures to help you get into character.
Mandy, I suggest having a prop like a necklace to focus on.
Mandy –
When this monologue is performed, try to visualize what it would be like to experience it. Body language will be very effective for the bandana monologue.
performer:mandy and sarah
coments:good voice and try to work on your emotions
performer: mikey c
good job, but maybe you could use your hands a little bit more
performer: layton r
good job but you could be a little bit louder and use more emphasis
performer: jason p
good job using the tone of your voice
performer: matt t
good job, you did good with your voice
performer: harison w
get a little bit louder, good job with the emphasis of your voice
performer: karl s
put more emphasis into it. and speak a little bit louder
performer: liesa c
really good job using emphasis!
performer: lauren s
good job but you might want to speak up a little bit
performer: sara
good job using emphasis, but speak up a little bit
performer: mandy f
good job using emphasis and speaking up when you needed to
Performer: Alex M.
you got into character really well like how you acted. I think you did a very good job.
Performer: Morgan M.
got into charcter very well. i liked the way you would really personalize it and talk as if you were talking to soemone. good job!
Performer: karl s.
Comments:will h.
good just be a little more seirous
lisa c.
willh.
good i liked how u made sompthing that was short long
Performer: lauren s.
Comments:will h.
just how it should be keep it up.
Performer: sarah
Comments:willh.
u should make it longer
Preformer :mandy f
comments: will h.
verry good emotion
Performer: alex m.
Comments:will h.
good just strange, pperfect timeing
Performer: morgan m.
Comments:will h.
addmore offence
Alexandra –
This monologue can be slowed down a bit.
Morgan –
No smiling. The speaker is serious and thoughtful, like something amazing is about to be discovered.
Performer: Alex M.
Comments: From Lauren S.
Did a great job overall. I liked the pausing.
Performer: Morgan M.
Comments: From Lauren S.
I would talk a little faster. Great job though
Morgan- good job staying in character
Andrew- good job speak louder
Comment0r: Sarah R.
Performer: Alex m.
Very good emotion, and expression.
Performer: Morgan M.
Good job getting into character, you made the performance very believe-able.
Sarah r- good speed but add pauses and movments.
Mandy F- Add emotions and movements also act sad her dad died.-Layton
Alexandra- good speed also add more volume and emotions.
Morgan-good pauses and sound and emotion.-layton
Andrew- Good additions also nice expressions.Layton
Sean-Speak up and add lots of expression.
Alexandra your time was perfect you did a good job. Morgandid a good job. Andrew did a good job he covered the bad word well. sean could talk with more inthusiasticism and be more into it.
Andrew –
believe in the character!!! This character is serious and speaks cunningly and slowly.
Sean –
An accent would work well for this monologue. Remember to have fun when you’re becoming the character!!!
Performer: Andrew L.
Comments: From Morgan M.
Get more into character, and much more movements.
Performer: Sean D.
Comments: From Morgan M.
Work on projection and movements, not just reading it off the paper. i couldn’t really understand what you were saying.
Performer: andrew
Comments:will h.
great, and goot timeing
sean d.
will h.
i didnt like it at all u need to accually try
but u had good timeing
****YOU GUYS ARE ALL IN HERE!!!!!!!!!!! Lo0K 4 ur NAMES!!!!!!!!!!!!****
BY: JEM PICA
Performer: karlee R.
Comments: Jem P.
Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character
and its like you practice it couple of times
Performer: Meghan J.
Comments: Jem P.
meghan, your voice – how you say every word and your pause is go0d
Performer: Dak0ta M.
Comments: Jem P.
Dak0ta, nicE… the way you read it and your pause keep it up…
Performer: Will H.
Comments: Jem P.
will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT
Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: Jem P.
great! its like you practice a lot
Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: Jem P.
The way you say it is g0od… keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands.
Performer: Brit k. & eric S.
Comments: Jem P.
Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah
Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character
Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B.
Comments: Jem P.
Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well
you trY!!!
Kailee, wh0w… that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d
Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R.
Comments: Jem P.
Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more
LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try
Performer: JAs0n p. & Matt T.
Comments: Jem P.
Performer: karlee R.
Comments: Jem P.
Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character
and its like you practice it couple of times
Performer: Meghan J.
Comments: Jem P.
meghan, your voice – how you say every word and your pause is go0d
Performer: Dak0ta M.
Comments: Jem P.
Dak0ta, nicE… the way you read it and your pause keep it up…
Performer: Will H.
Comments: Jem P.
will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT
Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: Jem P.
great! its like you practice a lot
Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: Jem P.
The way you say it is g0od… keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands.
Performer: Brit k. & eric S.
Comments: Jem P.
Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah
Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character
Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B.
Comments: Jem P.
Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well
you trY!!!
Kailee, wh0w… that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d
Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R.
Comments: Jem P.
Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more
LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try
Performer: karlee R.
Comments: Jem P.
Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character
and its like you practice it couple of times
Performer: Meghan J.
Comments: Jem P.
meghan, your voice – how you say every word and your pause is go0d
Performer: Dak0ta M.
Comments: Jem P.
Dak0ta, nicE… the way you read it and your pause keep it up…
Performer: Will H.
Comments: Jem P.
will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT
Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: Jem P.
great! its like you practice a lot
Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: Jem P.
The way you say it is g0od… keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands.
Performer: Brit k. & eric S.
Comments: Jem P.
Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah
Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character
Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B.
Comments: Jem P.
Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well
you trY!!!
Kailee, wh0w… that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d
Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R.
Comments: Jem P.
Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more
LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try
Performer: JAs0n p. & Matt T.
Comments: Jem P.
jas0n, its go0d but slow d0en a little bit
Matt, go0d j0b the way you use your hands but slow d0wn a bit.
Performer: karlee R.
Comments: Jem P.
Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character
and its like you practice it couple of times
Performer: Meghan J.
Comments: Jem P.
meghan, your voice – how you say every word and your pause is go0d
Performer: Dak0ta M.
Comments: Jem P.
Dak0ta, nicE… the way you read it and your pause keep it up…
Performer: Will H.
Comments: Jem P.
will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT
Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: Jem P.
great! its like you practice a lot
Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: Jem P.
The way you say it is g0od… keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands.
Performer: Brit k. & eric S.
Comments: Jem P.
Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah
Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character
Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B.
Comments: Jem P.
Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well
you trY!!!
Kailee, wh0w… that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d
Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R.
Comments: Jem P.
Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more
LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try
Performer: HArris0n W. & karl
Comments: Jem P.
harrisson, your em0tions work well! need to speak up a bit
Karl, go0d j0b!!!! you try”
Performer: karlee R.
Comments: Jem P.
Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character
and its like you practice it couple of times
Performer: Meghan J.
Comments: Jem P.
meghan, your voice – how you say every word and your pause is go0d
Performer: Dak0ta M.
Comments: Jem P.
Dak0ta, nicE… the way you read it and your pause keep it up…
Performer: Will H.
Comments: Jem P.
will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT
Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: Jem P.
great! its like you practice a lot
Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: Jem P.
The way you say it is g0od… keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands.
Performer: Brit k. & eric S.
Comments: Jem P.
Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah
Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character
Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B.
Comments: Jem P.
Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well
you trY!!!
Kailee, wh0w… that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d
Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R.
Comments: Jem P.
Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more
LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try
Performer: Liesa C. & lauren
Comments: Jem P.
Liesa – ok g0od j0b you did really well
lauren- speak up a bit and where is the movement of your hands???
Performer: karlee R.
Comments: Jem P.
Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character
and its like you practice it couple of times
Performer: Meghan J.
Comments: Jem P.
meghan, your voice – how you say every word and your pause is go0d
Performer: Dak0ta M.
Comments: Jem P.
Dak0ta, nicE… the way you read it and your pause keep it up…
Performer: Will H.
Comments: Jem P.
will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT
Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: Jem P.
great! its like you practice a lot
Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: Jem P.
The way you say it is g0od… keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands.
Performer: Brit k. & eric S.
Comments: Jem P.
Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah
Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character
Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B.
Comments: Jem P.
Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well
you trY!!!
Kailee, wh0w… that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d
Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R.
Comments: Jem P.
Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more
LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try
Performer: SArah R. & MAndy F.
Comments: Jem P.
SArah, More feelings Get int0 the character
MAndy, thats go0d but where is the movements of your hands
Performer: karlee R.
Comments: Jem P.
Karlee, that is go0d because its like you can really relate on your character
and its like you practice it couple of times
Performer: Meghan J.
Comments: Jem P.
meghan, your voice – how you say every word and your pause is go0d
Performer: Dak0ta M.
Comments: Jem P.
Dak0ta, nicE… the way you read it and your pause keep it up…
Performer: Will H.
Comments: Jem P.
will, its nice that you try to be the character and you did and the way how you use your cane is greAT
Performer: Ashley C.
Comments: Jem P.
great! its like you practice a lot
Performer: Nicole P.
Comments: Jem P.
The way you say it is g0od… keep the way you say every word and i love the way how you use your hands.
Performer: Brit k. & eric S.
Comments: Jem P.
Brit K, pause a bit and the way you say it well its great and yeah
Eric S. its go0d you s0uds like the character
Performer: Shivani U. & Kailee B.
Comments: Jem P.
Shivani, put more feelings on the character and your movements!!! well
you trY!!!
Kailee, wh0w… that is long well try not to fall a sleep next time but you still try the way you read it, its still go0d
Performer: Mikey C. & Layton R.
Comments: Jem P.
Mikey, the way you read it is go0d but you need to use your hands more
LAyt0n, you need more feelings bE the CHARACTER!!! but still go0d nice try
Performer: Alexandra M & Morgan M.
Comments: Jem P.
Performer: Sarah R.
Comments: From Liesa C.
Don’t hold your stomach unless its part of the role. And you didn’t show any emotion.
Performer: Mandy F.
Comments: From Liesa C.
Good job, but don’t walk across the room. And if you are going to make it look like part of the character’s movement.
Performer: Alex M.
Comments: From Liesa C.
Nice! I like the story. Slow it down and make it more funny. I know that Morgan will!
Performer: Morgan M.
Comments: From Liesa C.
Movement! Use a lot more emotion.
Performer: Andrew L.
Comments: From Liesa C.
I love that movie too much to not see anyone do it like Ferris. Good job on the word coverup. Make it more outgoing.
Performer: Sean D.
Comments: From Liesa C.
That was quiet and not very fun to listen to. You need to be crazy like you usually are. It was not a fun voice to listen to.
Performer: Andrew
Comments: From Lauren S.
Good job. speak up a bit
Performer: Sean
Comments: From Lauren S.
i would definitley speak up some.
Performer:Alexandria
Comments:Mikey C.
You need to get into character and project your voice.
Performer:Morgan M.
Comments:Mikey C.
You need to articulate your voice and get more into character.
Performer:Andrew L.
Comments:Mikey C.
You need to get into character because if you do this monologue could be hilarious.
Performer:Sean D.
Comments:Mikey C.
This monologue in the movie is hilarious if you get into character,project your voice.and emphasizeit would be awesome.
Performeer: Dakota
Commenter: Andrew L.
You really showed your mood well. Try moving around some more.
Performer: Will
Commenter: Andrew L.
When you are moving around while you are reading, don’t move the same directions over and over. I could tell that you were really serious. Your voice helped me figure out what mood you were in. You did a good job being the character.
Performer: Ashlee C.
Commenter: Andrew L.
Raise your voice more often at the correct times. You are supposed to be yelling. Slow down your reading too.
Performer: Nicole
Commenter: Andrew L.
The characterization was great. Try to act more nervous, though.
Performer: Jem
Commenter: Andrew L.
Your actions showed your mood very well. Emphasize more words. It would help you perform better.
Performers: Brit, Eric
Commenter: Andrew L.
Brit: Read slower, and buy some time.
Eric: Again, read slower to buy time.
Performers: Shivani, Kaylee
Comments: Andrew L.
Shivani: Emphasize more words. Show your mood more.
Kaylee: Move around some more.
Performers: Mike, Leyton
Comments: Andrew L.
Mike: Show your mood more. Show some characterization.
Leyton: Speek louder, and scarier. Pause between words.
Performers: Jason, Matt
Comments: Andrew L.
Jason: Use more of an accent.
Matt: You spoke nice and loud. Slow it down a little bit.
Performers: Harrison, Carl
Comments: Andrew L.
Harrison: Raise your voice more. Slow it down a bit.
Carl: Act physco. Raise your voice. Slow it down.
Performers: Liesa, Nicole
Comments: Andrew L.
Liesa: You showed characterization well. Try to move around, and look at the audience.
Nicole: Raise your voice. Try to Be the character.
Performers: Sarah R., Mandy F.
Comments: Andrew L.
Sarah R.: Raise your voice, and emphasize words. Slow it down as well.
Mandy F.: Show your emotions more.
Performers: Morgan, Alexandra
Comments: Andrew L.
Alexandra: Show your emotions more, and speak louder.
Morgan: Act phsyco, and strange, like you were crazy.
Ms. Nero, my computer wouldn’t let me paste all comments separatly.
Performers and comments:
Dakota- was clear, Will- needs to stop pusing and look up to the audience,
Ashley- needs to face the audience, was loud, slow down, Nicole-was loud and clear, needs to communicate with audience,
Jem- is really loud, look at audience,
Brit- was good and loud, Eric- had good facial expresdions, and voice,
Mikey- needs to know what to say, and not pause, Layton- stop messing with his sweater, be loud, have more emphasis in his voice,
Jason-has good emphaisis in voice, look at audience, Matt- is good , loud is in the character,
Harrison- be loud, slow down, get hands out of pocket, Karl- be loud, look at audience, stop shaking legs, needs to get into characater,
Liesa- had good body movements, is loud, use space well,Lauren- has good voice, get comfartable with audience,
Sarah- needs to be loud, Mandy has clear voice,
Alexandra- was loud, Morgan- is into the character,
Andrew- look at audience , be more loud, Sea n- be loud, clear
Karlee- was loud, but needs to get into charcater, Meghnan, was really loud, and had was into the character.